Tuesday 2 June 2015

Definition Poem- Laura

fluffy, fragile,
carrying whispers of hope.
stirring at
the faintest of breezes.
like long-lost explorers
off to new lands,
unsure of what awaits them.
a cottony white parachute
over a hard, black seed.
to produce many
new generations to come.

2 comments:

  1. Good description! I like your similes and metaphors, it really painted a picture!

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  2. Laura,
    The words you chose in your poem were quite descriptive and helped the reader to visualize the poem itself, which made it easy to guess what your poem was about:a dandelion.

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